
If you sit alone, hair opened to winds unfair;
If you are shell-enclosed, no one to care;
If water had blown your sand castle away;
The mistakes and retakes, don’t matter today.
Darkness of the skies is just your fear;
Your angel has come, get your self near;
Don’t drench your self alone in the rain;
She can take away memories of your pain.
Mist can be cleared by your realizations;
Sadness can vanish by honest conversations;
Your needs of an angel is always there, hence;
All you need to give to her is one last chance.
Keep your faith foundations strong;
The angel you left, never think her wrong;
When love shall ward away your darkness;
Soon you’ll be left with the worldโs happiness.
—–Have hope.Keep faith—–
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Thank you so much for your love and support.
You make this blog possible and help me help you. ๐๐ซโจ
Till next time! Take care of your precious self.
Aishwarya Shah
Needed to hear this today. Your posts are always very uplifting. Thanks!
I’m glad to know.
Beautifully written. And nice drawing. ๐
Thank you โค
really beautiful poem it is
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it.
I really enjoy your work. Your sketches are especially awesome! Cheers.
Lovely!
Thank you โค
Lovely. Really uplufting. I love the ending
I’m glad you loved it ๐๐
Your poem is awesome. You inspire me! Yes we are not alone. If we pay attention we will discover how love surrounds us each day. It is not always in the way we expect. Blessings on your week.๐ผ
Thank you so much ๐ซ โค have a wonderful week ahead. Love and Happiness ๐๐
This is beautiful and that drawing is stunning. It took me a couple of visits to realise the artwork is yours, you should sign them. Extraordinary talent ๐
Yes I will consider that. Thank you โค
Beautiful lines Aishwarya keep rock!!
Thanks!
Lovely rhythm to it!
Thank you โค
“Sadness can vanish by honest conversations”
There is so much packed into that single sentence for me, it makes me think of the friends I have made over the last few years who I can say anything to and who can say anything to me. That’s the truest form of friendship I’ve ever had and it makes me happy just knowing that I have that in life.
So sadness vanished. ^-^
I’m so glad you could relate to it so well. Thank you โคโค and I’m happy to know you have these awesome people with you. Keep smiling ๐๐
One of my favorite drawings!
Wow ๐ your comment made my day. Thank you โค
I loved it so much! Nice write up!!!
Thank you โค
Beautiful post.
Aishwarya I just read your few posts these are so awesome. I want to ask few things Iโve just started writing can you help me? Just asking it..
What do you need help with?
How to get more views and likes?
Try relevant tags and a good excerpt for your writing. Happy Blogging!
Beautiful
Thanks!
beautiful poem, beautiful artwork.
Thank you!
This was BEAUTIFUL โ๏ธโค๏ธโบ๏ธ
Thank you โค
Incredibly inspiring words, thank you for sharing!
I’m glad you liked it ๐
Well written
Thanks!
Beautiful thank you๐
Thank you for liking and relating to it.
That was incredible. Thank you for sharing your heart.
I’m happy you liked it so much ๐ซ โค
You’re Awesome๐๐
Thank you. I really appreciate it. โค
Lovely poem! ๐
Thanks ๐
I really enjoyed this. And I needed to read those kinds of words today. Thanks!
I’m glad it could help. ๐๐
I like the drawing too. Experiencing feelings.
I’m happy you could relate to it. ๐
Thank you for the loveliness!
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Namaste โค
Namaste ๐ I hope you’re doing well. Have a happy week. ๐
Im hangin in there aishwarya thanks ๐.. You as well ๐
Pretty uplifting words. You got a good thing going on here. Keep up the good work.
I sure will. Thanks for the appreciation. ๐โค
You are welcome. ๐
Did you draw it? Wow, It is beautiful ๐
And your words too
Yes, thank you so much ๐ซ โค
beautiful
those words.. wow!
Go ahead
So Awesome!
Wow! You my love are very talented. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
Thank you! โค โค โค